Implemented more suggestions.

src/GameProjects.jsx

@@ -21,15 +21,16 @@ class GameProjects extends Component {
     this.content = [
       {
         header: "Current Graphics Project",
-        subheader: "Side Project - Falmouth University: C++, Opengl, SDL",
+        subheader: `Personal Side Project - Standalone Project: C++, Opengl,
+        SDL`,
         image: NewGraphics,
         imageAltText: "Graphics",
-        content: `I'm currently working on a another graphics project as this
+        content: `I'm currently working on another graphics project as this is
-        is the area of computing I want to get back into. I plan on generating
+        the area of computing I want to get back to working in. I plan on
-        a cyberpunk city and implementing other features that you may find in a
+        generating a cyberpunk city and implementing other features that you
-        game engine, such as including a physics engine for a more complex
+        may find in a game engine, such as including a physics engine for a
-        character controller and an entity system so I can implement vehicles
+        more complex character controller and an entity system so I can
-        and other methods of terrain traversal.`,
+        implement vehicles and other methods of terrain traversal.`,
         buttonText: "Read Blog",
         buttonLink: "/graphics-blog",
       },
@@ -39,25 +40,26 @@ class GameProjects extends Component {
         Blueprints`,
         image: Monq,
         imageAltText: "Monq",
-        content: `This was my first time working in and creating a startup with
+        content: `Monq was developed by an indie startup which I founded
-        university friends. I mostly worked on ai aspects of the project as
+        alongside classmates from my university. It was developed in Unreal
-        well as working on some of the puzzle sections of the game. Though in
+        Engine 4 using a mixture of C++ and blueprints. I predominantly worked
-        the doing it for real indie envirenment I had my hand in pretty much
+        on the AI mechanics and puzzle implementation of the game, though due
-        every other programming aspect of the game also.`,
+        to the nature of working in a small team I was able to contribute to
+        puzzle design and texture generation through shaders.`,
         buttonText: "Learn More",
         buttonLink: "https://d-tail-entertainment.itch.io/monq",
       },
       {
         header: "University Graphics Project",
-        subheader: `Bsc (hons) Computing for Games - Falmouth University: C++,
+        subheader: `Falmouth University - Bsc (hons) Computing for Games: C++,
         Opengl, SDL`,
         image: Graphics,
         imageAltText: "Generated terrain",
         content: `This is where I learned how to create a graphics engine from
         scratch using OpenGL, and was the project which I enjoyed the most
-        during my bachelors degree. I especially enjoyed how deep I jumped into
+        during my bachelor's degree. I especially enjoyed how deep I jumped
-        C++ to improve it's memory footprint returning to this project in my
+        into C++ to improve its memory footprint returning to this project in
-        final year of university.`,
+        my final year of university.`,
         buttonText: undefined,
         buttonLink: undefined,
       },

src/GraphicsBlog.jsx

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ import {
   ListHeader,
   ListItemIcon,
   ListItem,
+  Link,
 } from "@material-ui/core";
 import ArrowRightIcon from '@material-ui/icons/ArrowRight';
 import Header from "./Header";
@@ -33,7 +34,7 @@ class GraphicsBlog extends Component {
         imageAltText: "Textured square",
         content: `Today I added textures to my game engine. Next up
         refactoring... But then camera movement (Or strangely enough world
-        movement around camera).`,
+        movement around the camera).`,
         buttonText: undefined,
         buttonLink: undefined,
       },
@@ -54,10 +55,7 @@ class GraphicsBlog extends Component {
         mediaType: "img",
         image: Blog3,
         imageAltText: "2 textured squares",
-        content: `Now I have a mesh class it's pretty easy to make multiple
+        content: `Now that I have a mesh class it's pretty easy to make multiple objects reusing textures and indices. Next, it's giving those meshes their own relative position rather than hard coding every position on every triangle point to move it 🙃.`,
-        objects reusing textures and indecies. Next it's giving those meshes
-        their own relative position rather than hard coding every position on
-        every triangle point to move it 🙃.`,
         buttonText: undefined,
         buttonLink: undefined,
       },
@@ -74,9 +72,9 @@ class GraphicsBlog extends Component {
             <CardHeader title="Graphics Blog" />
             <CardContent>
               <Typography variant="p" >
-                In this project I plan to generate a cyberpunk cityscape with
+                In this project, I plan to generate a cyberpunk cityscape with
-                an infinite level of verticality to really give it a large
+                an infinite level of verticality to give it a large sense of
-                sense of scale. The project written in C++ using SDL to manage
+                scale. The project is written in C++ using SDL to manage
                 windows and OpenGL to render the meshes.
               </Typography>
               <List dense>
@@ -94,31 +92,44 @@ class GraphicsBlog extends Component {
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
-                  Handle loading chunks asynchrounously as the game runs.
+                  Handle loading chunks asynchronously as the game runs.
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
                   Add a noise algorithm to vary the cityscape marching square
-                  generation.
+                  generation. (Looking at &nbsp;
+                  <Link
+                    component="span"
+                    rel="noopener"
+                    href="https://github.com/Aubrrn/FastNoise2"
+                  > FastNoise2 </Link>
+                  )
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
-                  Create mesh data library to make the marching square
+                  Create a mesh data library to make the marching square
-                  algorithm generate something that looks like a city.
+                  algorithm generate something that looks like a city. (May
-                  (May require a method of importing models)
+                  require a method of importing models)
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
                   Fancy lighting (Potentially bake some shadows into a chunks
-                  tuxture during the generaton phase).
+                  texture during the generation phase).
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
-                  Design and create an interesting movement system for the world created.
+                  Design and create an interesting movement system for the
+                  world created. (May need a physics engine like &nbsp;
+                  <Link
+                    component="span"
+                    rel="noopener"
+                    href="https://github.com/bulletphysics/bullet3"
+                  > Bullet Engine </Link>
+                  )
                 </ListItem>
                 <ListItem>
                   <ListItemIcon><ArrowRightIcon /></ListItemIcon>
-                  Look into potential implementation of mono-rails and
+                  Look into the potential implementation of mono-rails and
                   suspended trains as a stretch goal.
                 </ListItem>
               </List>

src/Greeting.jsx

@@ -42,9 +42,10 @@ class Greeting extends Component {
               <Typography variant="h1">Welcome</Typography>
               <Typography variant="body1">
                 Hi, My name is Warwick and I'm an Associate Lecturer in
-                computing at the Games Academy in Falmouth University with an
+                Computing at the Games Academy in Falmouth University, with an
                 academeic background in Computing for Games and
-                Entrepreneurship.
+                Entrepreneurship. I'm currently looking for oppertunities which
+                would allow me to explore graphics programming and simulation.
               </Typography>
             </CardContent>
             <CardActions>

src/Ramble.jsx

@@ -22,31 +22,31 @@ class Ramble extends Component {
             <CardContent>
               <Typography varient="p">
                 Ramble was a web project I created during my master's degree to
-                create a startup. In this project I acted as CTO and built a
+                create a startup. In this project, I was the CTO and built a
                 website that allowed users to stream their podcasts live and
-                accept call ins in a similar vain to talk shows! I learnt the
+                accept call-ins in a similar vein to talk shows! I learnt the
-                entire javascript web development stack from react to audio
+                entire javascript web development stack from React to audio
-                streaming to devops in order to make it a reality.
+                streaming to DevOps in order to make it a reality.
+              </Typography>.
+              <p />
+              <Typography varient="p">
+                It also had chatroom functionality with the ability to
+                re-stream to audiences much like other apps that came out in
+                the time since, such as Clubhouse.
               </Typography>
               <p />
               <Typography varient="p">
-                It also chatroom functionality with the ability to re-stream to
+                During the project's lifespan of just under two years, I mostly
-                audiences much like other apps that came out in the time since,
+                worked on creating the streaming functionality of the project
-                such as clubhouse.
+                and managing how the project was designed to function behind
+                the hood when it was deployed. I learned a ton about how web
+                deployment works during this time allowing me to work on web
+                development modules in the Games Academy at Falmouth University
+                today.
               </Typography>
               <p />
               <Typography varient="p">
-                During the project's lifespan of just under two years, I acted
+                Here's a demo of the project I took before we moved on.
-                as CTO. I mostly worked on creating the streaming functionality
-                of the project and managing how the project was designed to
-                function behind the hood when it was deployed. I learned a ton
-                about how web deployment works during this time allowing me to
-                work on web development modules in the Games Academy at
-                Falmouth University today.
-              </Typography>
-              <p />
-              <Typography varient="p">
-                Here's a demo of the project I took before before we moved on.
               </Typography>
               <p />
               <div>

src/WebProjects.jsx

@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ class WebProjects extends Component {
           />
           <CardContent>
             <Typography variant="body1">
-              In this project I acted as CTO and built a website that allowed
+              In this project, I was the CTO and built a website that allowed
-              users to stream their podcasts live and accept call ins in a
+              users to stream their podcasts live and accept call-ins in a
-              similar vain to talk shows! I learnt the entire javascript web
+              similar vein to talk shows! I learnt the entire javascript web
-              development stack from react to audio streaming to devops in order
+              development stack from React to audio streaming to DevOps in
-              to make it a reality.
+              order to make it a reality.
             </Typography>
           </CardContent>
           <CardActions>